Talk:Mirai no Museum/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 09:06, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

• Address the dead links
• which features instrumentation of -- which features instrumentation from
• The track is translated to "Future Museum" --> this should be used in the first line itself, like "Mirai No Museum" (Eng: "Future Museum")...."
• Perfume have performed the song through live performances throughout Japan. --> Perfume have performed the song in a number of live performances throughout Japan.
• Albums name in the infobox should be Level3 and not LEVEL3
• Remove the first para of Background section. It has nothing to do with this album or the song
• Correct the composition part. It is not clear whether you are sometimes talking about the album and sometimes about the single
• "breaks the musical delivery."[9] He labelled it the "one true issue on the album."[9] --> consecutive appearances of FN9 not needed, only one referencing at the end of the quote is enough. And the end-quote symbol should be inside the period.
• Please correct the issue about the endquotes through out the article
• and said it was "painfully out of place." --> and felt it was "painfully out of place."
• which did not feature on the album ---> which was not feature on the album
• FN 11, you do not need to specify Unknown author
• The track also peaked at two on Japan's Hot 100 chart ---> The wikilink for Hot 100 should be Japan Hot 100
• The song was certified gold by RIAJ for shipments of ---> The song was certified gold by the Recording Industry Association of Japan (RIAJ) for shipments of
• on 27 February of that year ---> Which year?
• "Mirai no Museum" was used as the ending theme song for the film Doraemon: Nobita no Himitsu Dogu Museum ---> Mention in the end which year the film came out to give perspective
• performed the track through live performance --> remove live performance, redundant
• premiered on Perfume's youtube channel --> premiered on Perfume's YouTube channel
• It depicts Perfume inside a comic book-theme world, trying to defeat the heavily armored warrior from the comic world. They are accompanied by a mysterious mascot man, who trys to hide away from the warrior when it attacks.[26] The video is the groups twelfth highest viewed music video on Youtube as of April 2015. --> Rephrase and remove the part about 12th highest video, has no significance
• Use en-dash in the credits section
• Mention the length of the track list in the respective section
• Use rowheader for the charts and the {{Certification Table Entry}} for the certification
• Use rowheader for release history
• The notes part is unreferenced.
• Use en-dash in all the reference titles using a normal dash
• Add catalogue no. for all the templates using {{cite AV media}}

On hold for seven days. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 14:59, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

@IndianBio: Done. Finished all adjustments, grammar, correcting, etc. above. GirlsAlouud (talk · contribs} 05:50, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

You havent used scope="row" in the tables GirlsAlouud. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 05:52, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

@IndianBio: Oops, missed that. Fixed those on Charts and Release history, along with changing the Certification table. Not sure about the "Japan" layout on the Release table though.