Talk:Mike Huckabee/GA1

GA Review

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I am sorry to inform the editors of this article that I am failing its Good Article nomination. Here is (an unexhaustive) list of some of the problems that need to be worked on:

• The lead is inadequate for such a long article. It should be 4 well developed paragraphs. See WP:LEAD.
• Article length. This article is way past the desired article length. Please see WP:SUMMARY on how to shorten it.
• WP:MOS problems, especially with WP:DASH
• Short and choppy paragraphs that seem closer to a timeline than prose in some places
• Citation needed tags
• The political positions should be turned from bullets to prose
• There are quite a few "bot generated titles" in the refs that need to be fixed
• There are quite a few references that need formatting

I'd suggest a peer-review and a couple of good copy-edits by fresh eyes. Feel free to renominate when these issues are addressed. Thanks. Nikki311 17:20, 20 October 2008 (UTC)