Talk:Melampitta/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Casliber in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:10, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
I'll take this - notes below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:10, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
being considered at one time related to the pittas, Old World babblers and birds-of-paradise.- they weren't considered related to all three at once...? So reword/ add "variously" or something?- Fixed. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
it's not "melam", but rather melas "black", or stem is melano- - from p. 431 of my Liddell & Scott Ancient Greek Dictionary, meaning "dark, gloomy, dusky, black"- Fixed. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
could link "taxonomic dustbin" to Wastebasket taxon- Fixed. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
Both species have a discontinuous distribution across New Guinea, and the greater melampitta is generally a rare bird that is seldom encountered, although this may because it lives in seldom visited areas- recommend changing one "seldom" and hyphen after the second one.- Fixed. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
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disconfirmed" ? - could find a plainer word than this I suspect.- I went with refuted. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
link terrestrial- Done. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
Otherwise looking pretty "Good"....
- Al done now, thanks Cas. Sabine's Sunbird talk 02:07, 11 June 2017 (UTC)
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