Talk:Marriage of Figaro (Mad Men)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Philologia Sæculārēs in topic problems with Pete-Peggy "dalliance"

problems with Pete-Peggy "dalliance" edit

Previous sentence read "A lovestruck Peggy eagerly greets Pete, who let her know that things must be different now that he's married, and Peggy readily reassures him, hiding her feelings, that their dalliance "never happened."

Problematic (besides the spelling & punctuation errors) are the assumptions (aka original research) about Peggy's feelings. The idea that Peggy was "lovestruck" (and "hiding her feelings") about Pete is a subjective interpretation and therefore to be avoided.--Philologia (talk) 20:02, 27 January 2018 (UTC)Reply