Talk:Marquinhos/GA1
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 17:31, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
- In the lead, the text says he plays as a center back but the infobox also says right back
- fee rising to....? Was it the transfer fee?
- No more details about his early life, junior days?
- playing the entirety... I dont know whether entirety is correct or not
- The one year transfer... You mean he played one year or it was a contract of one year?
- impressive early season performance... One or two quotes justifying it?
- From the last sentence it appears that he played the final match only of the national cup.
- What does teenager mean? I mean as in India and most of countries people below 18 are considered teenager. But at this transfer he was 19. I am not sure of French rules. This information needs to be rechecked.
- According to British sources, people whose age is a number ending -teen are teenagers, even though 18 and 19-year-olds have responsibilities as adults. In France (where 13 is treize and 19 dix-neuf) it is reported as under-20 players. However, sources even from the same country have different versions of this list, mainly because of currencies and the exchanges between them over the years. I have included versions of this in the article now. '''tAD''' (talk) 21:12, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
- Salvatore Sirigu saved from.. I think the word "the penalty shot" should be inserted.
- that year's world cup in the category - in that category
- Please add other people's opinions on his playing style.
I will check the references later. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 16:53, 16 March 2016 (UTC) The Almightey Drill
- The reference 5 do not mention that he joined the junior team in 2002.
- The reference 8 when opened shows this message "Oops! An Error Occurred.The server returned a "500 Internal Server Error"."
- The ref 10 doesnt mention he played six games.
- The reference 15 doesnt mention his Serie A appearances.
- The reference 28 doesnt mention it is his first goal of the season.
- Similar problem persists with the reference 37
- The reference 38 doesnt point the appropriate page.
- The reference 43 has got Marquinhos' name in the line-ups only.
- In the playing style, there is a mention of a teammate called "Silva". Link him.
RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:38, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
The article is on hold for seven days.
Royroydeb: I've been having trouble locating anything interesting about Marquinhos' youth by searching in Portuguese. I don't know what there is that could be notable, apart from what we already have about him joining Corinthians at the age of 8 '''tAD''' (talk) 16:34, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
- Then its fine. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 17:46, 28 March 2016 (UTC)