Talk:Mariya Ocher

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Junglejill in topic Copyedit needed

Copyedit needed edit

In the reasons for the cleanup template, I added that this article needs copyedit. I see that this has been removed. The reason that this article needs copyedit is mainly that the pronoun "she" has been omitted throughout the article; not only is this grammatically incorrect, it makes it very difficult to understand the text! There are also a few other issues with grammar and style. Please don't interpret the cleanup tag as an insult; that is absolutely not the intention. The tag and the reasons specified are there so that other editors could help you improve the article. Many Wikipedia articles require such improvements, and this is one of them. Again, this is absolutely nothing to take offense from! ʝunglejill 18:08, 17 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

location change edit

Hi there dear editors, was wondering whether it's possible change the location/name of this article in Wikipedia from "Mariya Ocher" to "Mary Ocher" - which is the correct stage/performer name, it's been wrongly placed here all along.

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