Talk:Lucky Star (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Hi, I'll be reviewing this article. The rules for GA reviews are stated at Good Article criteria. Feel free to respond to my comments under each one, and please sign each response, so that it's clear who said what.

When an issue is resolved, I'll mark it with  Done. If I think an issue remains unresolved after responses / changes by the editor(s), I'll mark it  Not done. Occasionally I decide one of my comments is off-target, and strike it out -- Aaroncrick (talk) 22:52, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

Coverage

• Y No obvious gaps. Aaroncrick (talk) 21:56, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Prose

• Y Aaroncrick (talk) 21:56, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Verifiability

• Y Aaroncrick (talk) 21:56, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Links validity check

• Y per Aaroncrick (talk) 21:56, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Check for disambiguation and other dubious wikilinks

• Y per Aaroncrick (talk) 21:56, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Lead

• "It was released as the fifth and the last single from the album on April 19, 1984, by Sire Records." Change to "It was released as the fifth and final single from the album released on April 19, 1984, by Sire Records."
  • Changed to "Released on April 19, 1984, by Sire Records, it was the fifth and the last single from the album." --Legolas ^(talk2me) 04:42, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
• "Lucky Star is a medium-paced dance track and combines the heavy beats of a drum with the souds of a guitar that is played in a high riff." "Lucky Star" is a medium-paced dance track and combines the heavy beats of a drum with the sounds of a guitar played in a high riff.
  • Done. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 04:42, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
• "Lucky Star" became Madonna's first top-five hit on the Billboard Hot 100, when it reached the peak position of four on this chart." on this chart
  • Done. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 04:42, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
• "After the video was released, Madonna's style and mannerisms became a fashion trend among the younger generation of that time." of that time
  • Done. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 04:42, 11 September 2009 (UTC)

Aaroncrick (talk) 22:58, 10 September 2009 (UTC)

Rest

Done some tweaking. Aaroncrick (talk) 00:01, 11 September 2009 (UTC)

Well I tweaked the rest of the article. Check out the contribution and see if there's anything you don't agree with. Aaroncrick (talk) 00:20, 11 September 2009 (UTC)

Looks like I'll pass the another GA from you! Aaroncrick (talk) 06:02, 11 September 2009 (UTC)