Talk:Lucinda Lee Dalton/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:56, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 15:56, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria edit
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "She shared her views via both prose and poetry" - seems a bit confusing. More specifically, what type of prose? Through articles in newspapers etc?
- "Dalton's family sacrificed the help an eldest daughter brings to a household by helping her attend school" - I don't understand this sentence. You mean that the eldest daughter is supposed to stay at home and not go to school?
- "Since she lived in rural areas" - Since she lived in a rural area
- "In her many contributions to the Women's Exponent, she is often credited as "L.D.D."" - this seems awkward to have as a standalone sentence amongst paragraphs. Also, is it relevant? If you don't want to remove it then I recommend merging this with another paragraph so it doesn't disrupt the flow of the prose
- A harvref error needs fixing (Harv error: link from #CITEREFSheree2002 doesn't point to any citation.)
- Also, there's an error in the notes section
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- No original research found.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This is well researched and broad for the subject, as well as a good read. I'll leave this on hold until all of the concerns are dealt with. JAGUAR 11:14, 11 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review Jaguar. I know that GA reviews take a long time, and I hope to do one or two myself soon! I replaced the Harvard reference with a regular citation template, and I reworded the sentences you noted were confusing/awkward. Do you have any remaining concerns? Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 17:41, 12 December 2016 (UTC)