Talk:List of clubs in the German football championship

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Certainly. The prose before your lists is incomplete. You need to both clarify what you mean, and offer citations as to where you found your information. Citations should be in the format, inline, with a Reference list at the end of the article. In some of your sentences, you've indicated that the championships resumed in 1905, but it is confusing if they ended in 1914, and resumed again in 1920, because the war ended in 1918. Finally, your assessment of post-WWII divisions was also confusing. Why was the Saarland a separate space? You might link to the proper Wiki article that establishes that, or offer a citation for this. --Auntieruth55 (talk) 03:07, 30 May 2009 (UTC) ==copied from my user talk page == that is perhaps a bit harsh, but it is much much better. I cleaned it up some more, and fixed your "shocking" spelling. I didn't realize you weren't a native speaker, although living in Australia explains your extreme fluency. I added some links, etc. I would suggest one more thing, well, one plus some consequences. I suggest you use the alphabetical listing template (I don't know what it is called, or where it is, instead of dividing your article by 24 sections/subsections. It will make it much more self-evident, what you've done. Then add "sections" to your text: foundation of the German national championship, Revival during Interwar years, Institution of the Bundesliga If you don't have a link to the Bundesliga, you need one. I don't remember. Also, there should be a section on "legacy" -- what did the league accomplish in terms of facilitating inter-state competition? Why did the Bundesliga supercede it? What were its drawbacks that made the Bundesliga necessary? Something like that. Let me know, and I'll re-assess. --Auntieruth55 (talk) 16:00, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

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