Talk:Li Shixian

Bad english

This page features malformed phrases and bad syntax. I will try to correct it, if I have time.

Help would be appreciated.

Lordmick 17:31, 26 February 2009 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lordmick (talk • contribs)

I tried to help a little. Still a lot of work to be done to fix this one. DaffyBridge (talk) 00:51, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Relationship with Wei Yuan

The section, 'Relationship with Wei Yuan', seems very out of place. It doesn't seem to fit in the article at all, let alone under a section titled 'Victories'. I'm going take the sentence in that section and move it to the lead. DaffyBridge (talk) 00:49, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Copyedit

I have attempted to repair the english in this article, I have read some other references to try and piece together what the original editor was trying to say, it still requires cites throughout, but at least it's readable now. --^Despay_re (^tal_k) 22:05, 31 March 2012 (UTC)