Talk:Levi Strauss & Co./Archives/2018
Latest comment: 6 years ago by SchmuckyTheCat in topic Badly written paragraph
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Badly written paragraph
[1] I didn't understand this paragraph so I moved the second half to where it made sense - as writing. It was reverted because the section details chronology. That's good, and I agree with the revert. The paragraph still makes no sense. It begins discussing changes in the product, buttons here, rivets there, then adds more about growth of the company. These sentences don't fit together as a topic. Split it up, reword it, do something with it. SchmuckyTheCat (talk) 23:23, 1 February 2018 (UTC)