Talk:Leipzig-class corvette

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review
Good articleLeipzig-class corvette has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starLeipzig-class corvette is part of the Screw corvettes of Germany series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 11, 2018Good article nomineeListed
October 12, 2019Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:50, 1 September 2018 (UTC)Reply


Given I've done one of the class, I thought I'd pick this one up as well. A few comments:

  • better off not starting a sentence with "And" → "And so Leipzig"
    • Done
  • perhaps put the range of boilers in the infobox?
    • Done
  • consider linking in the column headers of the table, keel laying etc
    • I think bold text links are advised against
  • add that the Civil War of 1891 was in Chile
    • Chile was in that sentence at one point but must've gotten removed during a rewrite and I didn't notice...
  • "being recalled to East Africa"
    • Done
  • suggest "She was raised in 1921 and broken up in the same year."
    • How about just "that year"?
  • images are all ok

That's me done. Nice work. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:04, 1 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 10:18, 1 September 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Peacemaker67: - is there anything else you'd like to see done? Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 10 September 2018 (UTC)Reply
No, just fell off my radar, sorry. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:59, 11 September 2018 (UTC)Reply
No problem - I claimed and then forgot to do this one last week ;) Parsecboy (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2018 (UTC)Reply