Talk:Lansing Mall/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 00:10, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Opening statement

For replying to Reviewer comment, please use  Done,  Fixed,  Added,  Not done,  Doing..., or  Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 00:10, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

• @Vami IV: Replied to all your suggestions. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 01:21, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

History

• The article never describes what exactly Wurzburg's is.
•  Done Clarified that it was a department store.
• The Lansing Mall was built just outside the city of Lansing, Michigan, the state's capital, within Delta Township along M-43 (Saginaw Highway). Built by Forbes-Cohen, it officially opened to the public on July 31, 1969. Reduce this to one sentence; it's kind of redundant as it is.
•  Done Copy edited.
• Reduce "1990s and 2000s" to a === header, and change the name to something like "1990s to present."
•  Done Changed header.
• Panera Bread[22] MOS:REFPUNCT
•  Done I knew that you'd point this out, so I fixed it before you noted it.

Photo gallery

Dissolve and disperse all two pictures in the gallery in the article prose.

•  Done Pictures moved.

GA progress

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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