Talk:Kupiansk civilian convoy shelling

Latest comment: 10 months ago by RadioactiveBoulevardier in topic Copy edit/rewrite required, style, tone, NPOV

Copy edit/rewrite required, style, tone, NPOV edit

Pretty self-explanatory. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 06:05, 12 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

@RadioactiveBoulevardier Rewrite done. Is this neutral enough? 123Writer talk 13:53, 24 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
As far as neutrality, it looks more or less fine, although more English-language sources would be nice.
However, IMHO it needs more general CE for readability. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 22:11, 24 July 2023 (UTC)Reply