Talk:Koudelka

Latest comment: 5 years ago by TarkusAB in topic GA Review
Good articleKoudelka has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starKoudelka is part of the Shadow Hearts series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 10, 2018Good article nomineeNot listed
December 25, 2018Good article nomineeListed
January 4, 2022Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

Untitled edit

I'm not linguistic purist but it meant to be an encyclopaedia and construction like this: "Edward Plunkett - A young man who looking for adventure and money" is at least improper

should be, either "who is looking for" or "who looks for" depending on tense used

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Koudelka/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 15:24, 26 December 2018 (UTC)Reply


I will do this one too. TarkusABtalk 15:24, 26 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Gameplay edit

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Synopsis edit

  • "While James prepares an explosive to reach the heart of Patrick's sealed mansion, Koudelka and Edward bond." -What is meant by bond here? Is this sentence even needed?

Development edit

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Release edit

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Reception edit

  • "Although Famitsu praised Koudelka's CGI movies and art design, its reviewer found some areas too dark to navigate easily." -Famitsu cross reviews are three people's opinions, not one.

Legacy edit

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Lead edit

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Those are my comments. TarkusABtalk 15:41, 6 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

TarkusAB, I think I've addressed your comments. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:41, 6 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Pass TarkusABtalk 18:44, 6 January 2019 (UTC)Reply