Talk:Kona Guitars

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Bgwhite in topic Untitled

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Addressed concerns and removed tags as no other information or discussion was created on talk page to resolve disputes. Willing to work with copy editors to come to mutual agreement. Thanks. StefanieMM (talk) 01:38, 27 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

I went thru and removed a lot of the "marketing and advertisement" speak. Remember, this is supposed to be an encyclopedic article and not an ad. For example:
"The Kona guitar is known for its professional sound and high quality construction" They are "known", by whom and are they reputable?
"Prices typically start at less than $129.00." That is an ad and how is related to the company?
It is nice to have user generated reviews from Amazon and other sites, but they are unreliable and are ads.
Bgwhite (talk) 18:55, 27 March 2013 (UTC)Reply