Talk:Ko Olina Station and Center/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:10, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:10, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Nice article, here are my comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:06, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio detected.
• No dablinks detected.

History

• being Aulani, Four Seasons' Ihilani Resort I think you should use a spaced endash instead of "being", for more clarity.

 Done

• Ko Olina Center, opened in 2010 No comma needed

 Done

• the center's purpose was to Should it not be "is"?

 Done

• As on June 2016 I think this should be "of" and not "on".

 Done

Design

• this location influenced the overall design of the center, incorporating the "historic" feel of the railroads. Should not look unsourced.

 Done I moved the source backward so it no longer looks unsourced.

• Thanks so much for the review! I believe I have fixed everything! Carbrera (talk) 03:07, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Great, I can promote this now. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:26, 21 June 2016 (UTC)