Talk:Killycluggin

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sitush in topic Copyedit

Copyedit edit

I have attempted a copyedit of this article. The problems were numerous and doubtless some still exist, along with pretty poor sourcing. Please note, for example, WP:EUPHEMISM (use died, not passed away), WP:MOSDATE ("20 December 2016" is the appropriate style), and avoid editorialising with emotives such as "unfortunately." - Sitush (talk) 21:45, 29 December 2016 (UTC)Reply