Talk:Kanthaugen Freestyle Arena/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Grondemar in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Grondemar (talk · contribs) 19:31, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

  Working Will post the review shortly. Grondemar 19:31, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

This article is very close to meeting the Good Article criteria; I have only a couple of minor concerns:

  • What is Kanthaugen? Is it a village, a mountain, or something else. It's a little unclear from the text.
  • "At the time of the closing, it was suggested reopened as part of a controversial proposal to build a tobogganing slide from Kanthaugen to Stampesletta." Passive voice: who is suggesting that the ski lift be reopened?
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    This review is being placed   on hold for a minimum of seven days to allow the above concerns to be addressed.

Thanks. Grondemar 20:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. I've amended the two sentences per your concerns. Arsenikk (talk) 12:54, 22 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Looks good, thanks for addressing my concerns. I shall now   pass this good article nomination. Congratulations! Grondemar 01:06, 23 December 2011 (UTC)Reply