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I completed the requested copy edit on this article. As the series has ended, and the verb tense in the article was inconsistent, I standardized it on the past tense.
The section "Character biography" was renamed to better conform with MOS:ANIME, as biographies of fictional characters are frowned upon in Wikipedia. This section needs to be dramatically trimmed, and someone familiar with the show should also edit it to make it more coherent. At the moment, it's far, far too detailed for an encyclopedia article. To quote MOS:ANIME, "Exhaustive background which chronicle blow-by-blow accounts of a character's history overwhelm the reader with trivial information."
The article is also written in an "in-universe" style, which isn't appropriate. Again, MOS:ANIME offers considerable guidance. // ⌘macwhiz (talk) 02:23, 17 September 2010 (UTC)Reply
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