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Copyediting edit
I have improved a few of the copying errors as well as added links. I would appreciate coaching on any further edits I can make to enhance the article Schrisfield (talk) 21:29, 26 April 2015 (UTC)
- @Schrisfield: I've gone ahead and taken a stab at it. Though there are some things that could be worked on still including, making the article less technical (as someone with only a limited amount of knowledge in the subject I found some of the jargon confusing) and converting your references to the {{Citeweb}} template which allows for better formatting. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. Winner 42 Talk to me! 22:16, 26 April 2015 (UTC)