Talk:K-pop in Latin America

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Samcari. Peer reviewers: Modaesu.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:33, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review-Celina

Hey Sam! I made a few grammatical edits and changed the structure of a couple of sentences so that they're more clear. I think what you have so far is good though! Make sure to add citations and hyperlinks eventually! I think trying to find more information about the impact of K-pop on culture or something along those lines would be good?

Also, when you talk about El Gran Show, you first refer to it as a dancing competition, but then later you talk about an official Facebook page for the reality show, so I got a bit confused because I think you mean a Facebook page for El Gran Show, but I didn't know this show was a reality show? If it is, maybe you want to refer to it as such earlier on, or change how you refer to it when talking about the Facebook page later?

Also, I think the incident you mention about the show producers ignoring the public's request for K-pop but featuring k-pop songs the next year interesting. Maybe you can find more information on what caused the producers to change their minds or make it clearer that it was because of the turmoil and backlash?

Besides these, I don't have other suggestions. What you have is good!! Maybe just find some more info! Hope this helped! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Csun0310 (talk • contribs) 21:11, 1 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review - Matt

Great article that touches on a bunch of aspects of K-pop in Latin America and uses sources well. Some suggestions:

1) Add a header section above the table of contents. You can take a part of the "Overview" section and move it above - also change the "Overview" title formatting, since it looks different from the rest of the titles.

2) In the "Impacts" section, try to avoid use of passive voice - who created the cultural centers? You describe the purpose, but not what institution was behind their creation.

3) Adding the article to categories will help other users/readers find the article if they are interested in K-Pop, and will add to the sphere of K-Pop knowledge on Wikipedia. You could also link to the Korean pop Wikipedia page in a "See also" section. Modaesu (talk) 21:16, 8 May 2018 (UTC)