Talk:Justin Flom
Latest comment: 1 year ago by 47.12.161.150 in topic Divorce paragraph source
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I'm not a wikipedia expert, but the introduction bio needs serious revision. It seems like it has major bias in the last two lines: "Justin Flom’s loosely structured, gorgeously shot Magic Block Party is a particular delight featuring his signature trick "Water to Coke"[2] with "check this out" magic for the MTV Generation.[5] Not just the same old stuffing of women into cabinets and stabbing them with swords. [6]"
Gorgeously shot? particular delight? What's with the final line too? Even if it is a quote from an article, it makes no sense being in the introduction in that format. 129.236.228.218 (talk) 08:22, 28 April 2015 (UTC)billymaysrip
Divorce paragraph source edit
That really can't be acceptable, can it? 47.12.161.150 (talk) 06:25, 20 March 2023 (UTC)