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Hey Ashley! I just read through your draft and have a few pieces of feedback:

  • In your opening, giving one specific example of work, award received, or something along those lines would help readers better understand why your scholar matters. Right now it feels a little general.
  • In the Background section, stating "Bachelor of Arts in _____" and "Masters in __" could help readers know her background and where she got started with her research.
  • Also when you say why she got interested n communication ethics, expanding on what this means could give more information on Wood.
  • When discussing her awards, expanding on what winning them entails, how she got them, or what she got them for, could help readers better understand why they're important.

But overall, I think the draft is well written and informative! Nice job!

Ashleyhegeholz (talk) 18:59, 6 April 2017 (UTC)Ashley HegeholzReply

Ashley H -- good reviews

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