Talk:Joffre-class aircraft carrier
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:05, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
Will review; although it'll be a few days. Hog Farm Talk 03:05, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
- No rush, I need to expand the lede a bit more anyways.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:06, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
- "Especially once the Germans began building a carrier of their own in 1936" - sentence fragment
- The infobox and body disagree on the speed at which the range could be achieved
- Infobox says the deck armor was 40mm to 70 mm, but the body says 30mm to 70mm
- Conning tower armor is in the infobox but I'm not seeing it in the body
- Image licensing is fine
- Sources are all reliable
- AGF on source-text integrity given nominator's good reputation and long experience
Hog Farm Talk 22:47, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
- All done, thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:22, 5 June 2022 (UTC)