Talk:Joel Farabee

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 19:42, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 19:42, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

• I just finished watching the game today, and he just scored a goal. That means the stats need updating.
• The lead could use more of his college career and his career with the Flyers so far. Done
• Does Dave have any profession?  Done
  • Business owner
• Link Ottawa in the lead. Done
• Change "NCAA Division 1" to NCAA Division I. Done
• Link University of New Hampshire. Done
• "6-1, 160 pounds" Conversions needed.
• "first-round" Don't think the hyphen is needed. Done
• Ref 28 doesn't explicitly say Farabee was on the team. Done
• On the awards table, the third column's first cell needs some type of label. Done
• If you can, ref 20 should be replaced with a better source. Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:31, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Nova Crystallis, thanks for the review (didn't realize you're a Philly fan). I will work on these changes ASAP and add something about the 2021 season. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:21, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2021 (UTC)

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• ... that in 2019, Joel Farabee became the first player born in the 2000s to become a Philadelphia Flyers player? Meltzer's Player Profiles: Joel Farabee "Joel Farabee holds the distinction of being the first player born in the 2000s to play for the Flyers."
  • ALT1:... that Joel Farabee closed his eyes before recording his first career National Hockey League goal? POSTGAME 5: Shootout Stunner! "He admitted afterwards that he closed his eyes, fired it on net and was relieved that it went in to finally grab his first tally."
  • ALT2:... that in 2020, Joel Farabee became the first player born in the 2000s to score a goal in the Stanley Cup playoffs? Flyers notebook: Joel Farabee ‘ready to go dancing’ with Montreal up next "Farabee, born Feb. 25, 2000, became the first NHL player born in the 2000s to score a postseason goal, even if it was only a round-robin game."

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Broadway Bridge (Manhattan)
• Comment: His birthday is February 25, so if this could go out on that day I would appreciate it. Otherwise, it's fine.

Improved to Good Article status by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:06, 16 January 2021 (UTC).

• article promoted to good article on Jan. 16 - check.
• Way long enough at 9000 characters - check.
• Citations exist, are plentiful, and pass spot-check. Hook is directly cited. Check.
• No disputes, BLP-compliant. Check.
• No close paraphrasing, via the Earwig tool. I made one wee change. Check.
• Neutral. Check.
• Hook looks properly formatted and appropriate length to me. The main hook was hook-y enough to catch my attention. (Really, they let people born in the 2000s into pro sports now? They didn't in my day! Get off my lawn!) I strongly prefer the main hook to alt-2, which is just a more-specific version of the main hook. That said, others may prefer the second hook, which is also cited and clearly written. I'd go with the first 'cause it's more general-interest, but YMMV.
• I don't see a QPQ review. I might be missing something - I'll ask the nominator on their talk page. Once that's done, this is good to go!Moishe Rosenbaum (talk) 02:06, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Moishe Rosenbaum, QPQ done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:13, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Got it! Thanks... enjoyed reading this!Moishe Rosenbaum (talk) 22:45, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Moishe Rosenbaum (talk) 22:50, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

I added this to the Special occasion holding area. SL93 (talk) 05:58, 28 January 2021 (UTC)