Talk:Jeff Jordan (defensive back)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 months ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:07, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
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Notes edit
- PFR said 113th by Broncos and PFA said 114?
Done
- That is very bizarre...I've never come across a draft placement disagreement before if I can recall. I... don't know what to do... Any ideas?
- I'm not sure how there could be a difference either? Should we check the list for PFR and PFA until we come up to the discrepancy lol.
- I'm going to go with the 113 that PFR has because the PFA draft listing is switching around people for some reason. It has Larry Elkins as 1st overall and Namath as second which isn't what happened. Jordan was switched around with Tony Guillory. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:35, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- Alright. BeanieFan11 (talk) 13:43, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- I'm going to go with the 113 that PFR has because the PFA draft listing is switching around people for some reason. It has Larry Elkins as 1st overall and Namath as second which isn't what happened. Jordan was switched around with Tony Guillory. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:35, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how there could be a difference either? Should we check the list for PFR and PFA until we come up to the discrepancy lol.
- That is very bizarre...I've never come across a draft placement disagreement before if I can recall. I... don't know what to do... Any ideas?
- "Games started: 5–7" 5 or 7 Done
- Done.
- link salutatorian Done
- Linked.
- "football talents, and" remove comma Done
- Done.
- no college stats i guess Done
- Found and added some.
- "helping the Vikings win four matches" we didnt point out the teams record in the prior season and four games isnt good. So add a record to the first season or remove this
- Removed.
- Since you removed that, I'm not sure "complied a record of 3–8–3" should be in the next season either unless you want to add them all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:24, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- Removed.
- do you know what years he was All-Missouri Valley Conference or if he was first or second team. Suggest adding to the infobox Done
- Added selections to prose and infobox.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:19, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:43, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- "98-yard catch" prior sentence said it was 97. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:24, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: He had a 97-yard interception return and a 98-yard touchdown catch - that seems to be what I have the article say. BeanieFan11 (talk) 13:46, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:55, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: He had a 97-yard interception return and a 98-yard touchdown catch - that seems to be what I have the article say. BeanieFan11 (talk) 13:46, 26 October 2023 (UTC)