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This is a very informative article. Just a small note about specific wording: "Marsh faced difficulty in progressing her career" - I think the more effective word choice would be "advancing" instead of "progressing"

Also I think it might be valuable to expand just a bit on the narrative/visual content of some of her films (whichever ones are available to view on the NFB website). It would be interesting to know a bit more about the way women are spoken about and represented within the narratives and cinematography of the propaganda films she made. (ie. What was the actual plot of "Women are Warriors"? Claryce (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

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