Talk:James van Riemsdyk

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Theleekycauldron in topic Did you know? nomination

Is it vanRiemsdyk or Van Riemsdyk? edit

I've noticed that most media reports are using vanRiemsdyk. --4.239.168.233 00:33, 23 June 2007 (UTC)Reply

James vanRiemsdyk according to NHL.com. Let's move this article and change stuff.--Serte Talk · Contrib ] 12:42, 23 June 2007 (UTC)Reply
I think this article should be moved to James van Riemsdyk.[1][2] Also, notice how his last name looks on the back of his Phantoms jersey.[3] --scottieISmad (talk) 04:15, 26 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

vanRiemsdyk Gained 10 pounds edit

Source right here that says he is 6'3, 200 lbs. http://www.tsn.ca/nhl/teams/players/bio/?id=6041&hubname=nhl-flyers Sidthekid87 03:33, 10 July 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:James van Riemsdyk/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 04:13, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

I will review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:13, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Review edit

Philadelphia Flyers edit

  • I think you can expand on his impact as a rookie beyond the team (see [4])
  • He was kind of in the race for the Calder [5], earning 3 votes [6].
    •   AddedGhostRiver 17:08, 29 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
    • LOL, imagine coming back from a 3–0 deficit. Couldn't be the Leafs.
      • This is Philly! We get it done, but we never make it easy! — GhostRiver 17:08, 29 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • I imagine the "kid line" is because of their youth but I think it can be explained a bit. Maybe alongside young forwards Brayden Schenn and Jakub Voráček

Toronto Maple Leafs edit

  • I think you can expand a bit on the trade with Schenn. Per this, he was part of trade rumors during the offseason/throughout the year.
  • WL plus-minus
  • In the fourth paragraph, you WL Kadri and Komarov even though they were WL in the first paragraph

Second stint with Philadelphia edit

Couple more things edit

  • The sentence about the "kid line" is kind of a run-on. As well, you should take out which because it doesn't make sense with the sentence.
    •   Fixed How does it look now?
  • Can you please add a hyphen in hat trick to bypass the redirect?
    •   Done
  • For the Athletic sources that are hidden behind a paywall, please follow Template:Closed access
    •   Done Used "url-access=subscription", as recommended by the template
  • Why do you need two different sources (one in the body and one in the chart) for the Hockey East All-Rookie Team? Can you not use the same one?
  • Can you please change Calder Trophy to Calder Memorial Trophy to bypass the redirect?
  • Please WL the first mention of The Morning Call in work
    •   Done
GhostRiver, this should do it  . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
HickoryOughtShirt?4 All done! Thanks for taking look at such a large article! — GhostRiver 00:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
GhostRiver, the longer it is, the more fun it is! I am passing this, well done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:15, 30 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Did you know? nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 03:37, 23 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

 
James van Riemsdyk in 2011

Improved to Good Article status by GhostRiver (talk). Self-nominated at 04:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC).Reply

  • Sorry, but I've never seen sentences starting with a lower case letter before, surely it should be "Van Riemsdyk" at the start of a sentence, not "van Riemsdyk"? Gatoclass (talk) 11:42, 30 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Not sure it's covered by MOS but "van" here is a tussenvoegsel and should be capitalised if no other name precedes it (James van Reimsdyk, Mr J van Reimsdyk, but Van Reimsdyk or Mr Van Reimsdyk, for example). It shouldn't appear in lower case at the start of a sentence. ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ 22:57, 21 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
  •   Full review needed. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:44, 17 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
    •   Article is new enough (GA promoted on October 30), definitely long enough, neutrally written, and well sourced. No issues detected by Earwig. Both hooks are interesting and verified to given sources which are cited in the article. For DYK purposes, consider duplicating ref #93 at the end of the hook sentence (like "... deflected off of his face into the net.[93]" Strong preference for the first hook (puck bouncing off his face). QPQ done. Image is compatibly licensed and clear at 100px, but it is not used in the article, which is required. DanCherek (talk) 04:42, 18 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
      • DanCherek I have added the reference accordingly and have moved the images around so that the one in the DYK is the header image and the one that was in the infobox is in the body. I have also capitalized "Van" any time it starts a sentence, even though I think that policy is silly because it's not actually his name. — GhostRiver 17:17, 22 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

ALT0 to T:DYK/P6 without image