Talk:James Forrest (footballer, born 1991)/GA1
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Reviewer: Jmorrison230582 (talk · contribs · count) Jmorrison230582 (talk) 23:32, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
Prose and MOS edit
The lede is much too short and the body of the article needs a copy edit. To give some examples, the first sentence of the body doesn't scan correctly, there are inconsistencies in date formats and there is a month not capitalised. The formatting of the references needs to be improved.
References edit
The first reference given, for his first signing a professional contract, is not working. The rest of the article is well referenced and has no original research.
Broad in its coverage edit
There are obvious gaps in the article, which may in fairness be partly due to the fact there isn't much publicly known about such a young player. For example there is no description of his particular style of play, his attributes or temperament.
Neutrality edit
There really aren't any viewpoints offered to suggest whether or not this is biased.
Stability edit
The article appears to be stable and not subject to edit wars.
Illustrations edit
The two images given are adequate and are free to use.
Overall edit
I think the article requires significant expansion to reach a GA standard. There are other issues, which could be addressed more quickly, but the lack of any detail about the subject beyond the bare facts of his career to date makes it hard to assess properly at this point. Jmorrison230582 (talk) 23:32, 30 September 2011 (UTC)