Talk:Jagdgeschwader III

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Georgejdorner in topic GA Review


GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jagdgeschwader III/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria edit

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (14.5% is highest, due to incidental parallels.)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No Dead links  Y

Prose Suggestions edit

Lede edit

  • and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of three attacking Armees. suggest you change this to and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of the three Armees involved in the attack.
  • not to mention frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals, suggest along with frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals,

Operational history edit

  • Flying was kept to a bare minimum. JG III husbanded its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive. suggest Flying was kept to a bare minimum, as JG III was husbanding its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive.** Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • @Georgejdorner: That is all of my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:51, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply