Talk:Iguana Yachts

Tone

This article reads like marketing material. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mongoletsi (talk • contribs) 12:59, 1 September 2014 (UTC)

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Issues with citation links and grammar

Hello!

When editing today, I couldn't access several of the citations: citation 2 leads to some login page; citation 5 is no longer accessible; and citation 6 is the homepage of a news site. Most, if not all, of the citations are in French. I'm not familiar with the language so I don't want to attempt to fix the citations and end up doing so poorly. Also, citations 1 and 2 from the article version before my edit vanished from the citation list, I don't think they were used in the article at all so that might be why.

I fixed advertisement-ish language and weird grammar in my edit today; it should read more neutrally now. I left some parts that lacked clarity because I figured their meaning was lost in translation. I didn't want to remove meaning from the article for the sake of clarity as I'm not totally familiar with the topic.

This is my first major edit (more than just small grammar and punctuation changes) so if you have any feedback please let me know! I'm new and I want to make sure I'm working with the proper etiquette and that I'm making a positive impact so any help is hugely appreciated.

Thank you and have a great day! Owenmp4 (talk) 16:23, 1 October 2022 (UTC)