Talk:House of Flavors

Advert

Can someone tone this down and make it read like an encyclopedic article rather than an advertising piece, it currently reads as if it's a feature in a magazine rather than something Wikipedia should be hosting. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:05, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:18, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Doug. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Puuuj (talk) 19:14, 21 August 2016 (UTC)Most of the article looks good, though the last section still seems to be written like an advertisement.

5 or 4 flavors?

It says "that came in five flavors - vanilla, French vanilla, chocolate, and blue moon.", but that only lists 4. Is one missing, or were there really only 4? T-bonham (talk) 04:43, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:House of Flavors/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• For the infobox, I suggest using "plainlist" instead of <br />.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• The lead also needs to be expanded to better summarize the article.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

History

• Add a serial comma after "buttermilk".

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "Park Dairy".

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• "to producing" → "on producing"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "different varieties".

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Operations

• "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• "that features" → ", which features"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• "popular to" → "popular in"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Guinness Record attempt

• " . " → ""

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Those videos near the bottom look messy on my screen and I'm not sure if they're necessary.

•  Done Organized section for better display of picture and videos.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• There are multiple references with [dead permanent link] tags, so I would find replacements.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Archive all archivable (either manually or with this tool).

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:33, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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