Talk:Honoré Théodore Maxime Gazan de la Peyrière

Latest comment: 17 years ago by A bit iffy in topic Copyedit
Good articleHonoré Théodore Maxime Gazan de la Peyrière has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Copyedit edit

I've just done a fair amount of copyediting as the article was written as if by someone with English as a second language. (Curious, as it was User:Skysmith who created it but he/she appears to write as if English is his/her first language judging by his/her user page.) However, there's one sentence in the third paragraph of this article that eludes me: "Regiment first became a garrison troops in Strasbourg but joined the battle in December near Wissembourg." Does that mean the troops were garrisoned till they joined battle? Or something else? --A bit iffy 10:06, 25 June 2006 (UTC)Reply