Talk:Holy Names Hawks

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Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Since my valid WP:MOS-supported edits keep being reverted, I will explain them in detail here. If you agree witht hem, discuss them here before reverting, and please provide references to appropriate Wikipedia policies.

The article is about the Hawks, not HNU Athletics, so the lead sentence should explain what the Hawks are.
"In 1994 Holy Names University, then Holy Names College, elevated its club sports to...." A univeristy is an "it", not a "they".
"The University is currently in the third year..." - changed to "The university is in the third year..." because of WP:INSTUTITION and because the presente tense indicates the current condition -- "currently" adds no meaning here.
"Varsity Sports" heading changed to "Varsity sports" per WP:HEAD

Ground Zero | t 12:42, 8 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

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