Talk:History of The New York Times (1851–1896)

Civil War detail

Don't want to mess up this v good article but a possibly interesting Civil War detail is that Samuel Wilkeson Jr.'s coverage of the Battle of Gettysburg was framed by his discovery of his own son's body on the battlefield.

Some detail here:

• https://books.google.com/books?id=IYmyitTx71IC&pg=PA96
• https://www.nytimes.com/2018/07/04/insider/the-times-at-gettysburg-july-1863-a-reporters-civil-war-heartbreak.html

cheers, ~j jengod (talk) 23:35, 19 January 2024 (UTC)

Improvements

There is ongoing effort and coordination at Talk:The New York Times#History of NYT 1851-1896 content on improving this article preferably to GA standards. Soni (talk) 10:39, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 03:50, 10 March 2024 (UTC)

I will review this.750h+ (talk) 03:50, 10 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Quickfailing this. Seventy citation needed tags. Conversely, it is a nicely written article.

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Restoring old versions of article

@ElijahPepe can you point out what you mean by "unexplained mass content removals"? The removals you are talking about were discussed on the NYT page's talk archive, and in edit summaries. Reverting every change you disagree with every few weeks is not going to improve the article.

Most of the content you reverted is adding overly detailed and flowery language without much encyclopediac value. Take this paragraph, which just seems to be overly specific descriptions of multiple sub-papers.

Emboldened by its success, the New-York Daily Times experimented with multiple formats. The paper published the Weekly Family Times to circulate in rural areas; the weekly issue of the Tribune attributed to much of Greeley's success. However, rail transportation in the United States created advances in circulating daily newspapers, forcing the paper to discontinue the Weekly Family Times in the 1870s. A Semi-weekly Times lasted several years longer. The prevalence in rail transportation also ended the Campaign Times for presidential years. The Times for California was started in 1852 and circulated when mail boats could be sent to California from New York. The effort failed once local California newspapers came into prominence.

Similarly, consider this paragraph. I do not say WP:NOTNEWS for articles from a century ago, but that's what it is. Financier and Winston Churchill's grandfather Leonard Jerome held a significant interest in The New-York Times Newspaper Establishment and offered his services during the riot. By 7 p.m., the rioters learned of the Times's weaponry and chose to once again attack the Tribune instead, chanting, "We'll hang old Horace Greeley to a sour-apple tree".

Overall, just restoring everything without discussion seems very odd. You've not raised any of this in talk. It'd be better to discuss than just keep restoring versions you prefer, that way lies WP:OWN. Soni (talk) 03:07, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

The first quote is an overview of the paper's experimental formats. The second is a concluding statement to an event described in the paragraph. If I had not stated that the Times averted an attack, I would be faced with further questions about what happened to the Times. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 03:42, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

If I had not stated that the Times averted an attack, I would be faced with further questions about what happened to the Times But the remaining lines already state that. What you're doing is adding overly specific details that do not actually add any more context.

Look at the paragraph that existed before your revert. What part of this tells you "We didn't state the Times averted the attack"? Warned by the attack on the Tribune, the staff of the Times armed themselves with Gatling guns. Raymond sent sixteen men armed with Minié rifles to the Tribune's office to stave off the mob while two hundred policemen marched onto Printing House Square. The New-York Times remained prideful in its coverage of the event.

A similar picture can be drawn for the other paragraphs you want to restore as well. Consider this. what value does one rumor have on the overall broader point of Civil War news coverage.

A rumor within the Union Army, though not within the Times's offices, stated that a Times correspondent was fortunate to escape during the Battle of the Wilderness. One night, Ulysses S. Grant and George Meade discovered a Times correspondent hiding in the bushes notating the strategic plans of the Army of the Potomac. The correspondent was nearly shot by a subordinate officer while observing Ambrose Burnside's corps.

This is an encyclopedia article, not a movie plot. We aren't supposed to detail every account of every incident from the last 150 years of NYT. We should focus on the most historically significant aspects of the newspaper's history, and cover all of it broadly enough. I could point out more paragraphs that need similar trimming, but my overall point is, you're not going to get anywhere if you just revert any improvements to exactly as you last edited it. Soni (talk) 03:55, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

I'd waited for a few days just in case you had sufficient reasoning for the revert. I've now restored the article to the state before the mass revert. Please discuss here before re-reverting Soni (talk) 14:37, 9 May 2024 (UTC)