Talk:Himegoto/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Tintor2 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:05, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
Hello Juhachi, I'll be reviewing this article to see if it can pass GA. From what I've read so far the article looks pretty good and may easily become a GA. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 20:05, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
- Is there any reason why the manga's chapter list don't contain a summary? If I were to guess the chapters are completely unrelated (Just like when I got tired of writing summaries from Gintama's manga.
- The official anime website has the the bluray. It could be used to replace the amazon link which are often criticized in wikipedia.
- The reception section relies too much on quotes. Is it possible to paraphrase some of them?
- Just in case, I recommend you to archive some links that you need like the first one.
Anywhere those are my issues. Good work Juhachi.
- The manga doesn't really have a story that connects chapters together; in short, every chapter is essentially self-contained in its plot. The series is about 60 chapters long, so there would essentially have to be about 60 sentences describing every chapter.
- I replaced the BD ref with the official website.
- I tried to paraphrase some of the reception section, but it's hard since there isn't much reception I could find for this series to begin with.
- I archived ref 1.