Talk:Henry O'Farrell

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Soczyczi in topic Article needs cleanup.

Article needs cleanup. edit

The text of this article is extremely poor, with grotesquely ungrammatical sentences and outright incoherent passages.

"O'Farrell was an alcoholic listed as a law clerk having briefly been employed by his brother a Melbourne solicitor with Messrs O'Farrell & Son who regularly advertised in The Star newspaper of Ballarat from premises on Doveton Street, Ballarat."

Who had premises on Doveton Street? If the brother O'Farrell was a Melbourne solicitor, then who advertised in the Ballarat Star? And why is this even mentioned?

--Rich Rostrom 05:16, 30 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

  • Well, don't hesitate to clean it up then. Soczyczi 16:05, 16 August 2007 (UTC)Reply