Talk:Heaven (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:49, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

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@IndianBio: Any chance you'll get to this soon? Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:23, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

What about tomorrow?

@IndianBio: Today will be perfect Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:33, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• I don't see Dance-pop being sourced in the article body?
• The bit about the critical reception in the lead, if it uses quoted words from the prose below, it would need the source adjacent to it to comply WP:V. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 12:40, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
• it was shot by John Perez in Shangri-La, Mauritius in April 2016 --> Not clear referring to the teaser or the main vid. I would say remove the teaser part from lead.
• The clip portrays Inna interacting with the locals of a seaside resort community, with her also being present at a party and a boat trip with her love interest played by Olivier Phineas Boissard. --> The clip portrays Inna with the locals of a seaside resort, at a party, and also a boat trip with her love interest played by Olivier Phineas Boissard.
• Bulgaria is part of WP:BADCHARTS. Please remove.
• number 151 for Russia.

More to come. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 12:40, 14 September 2016 (UTC)

@IndianBio: I see you're very busy. If you want to, I can ask someone else to review this. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:32, 2 October 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.