Talk:HMS King Edward VII/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 07:10, 9 January 2019 (UTC)
I will review this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 07:10, 9 January 2019 (UTC)
Lead
- OK, no issues identified
Infobox
- Formatting issue here: Barbettes: 12 in
- Good catch
Design
- Beam dimension doesn't match infobox
- Must've been a typo
- The armour thickness dimensions include conversions to mm although the infobox conversions are to cm
- Fixed
Service history
- "subsequently participated in a blockade by an international force of Montenegro and in an occupation of Scutari to force the Macedonians to relinquish the city to the newly-formed Albania"; suggest "subsequently participated, as part of an international force, in a blockade of Montenegro..." for clarity
- Works for me
Notes/References/Further reading
- No oclc for Jellicoe?
- Added
- Most of the book citations format for further reading don't match the references. specifically date of publication presentation. Also no isbn for Gibbons
- Have updated these.
Other stuff
- Image tags look OK
- One dupe link: destroyer (see final section)
- Fixed
- No dablinks
- External links check out OK although in the external links section it says one is broken. That one works fine for me.
- Works for me too - I'll remove the note
Will check back in a few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:12, 13 January 2019 (UTC)