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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 00:43, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
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Comments edit
1. complement was 137 officers and men in peacetime. Might be worth noting the additional men in wartime.
- Done.
2. Exclusive of government-furnished equipment like the armament. Do you mean Excluding?
- Done.
3. her sister Griffin. Suggest - her sister-ship Griffin
- Nope, already referred to her as sister ship earlier. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:18, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 00:43, 22 February 2011 (UTC)