Talk:HMS Ardent (H41)/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:06, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
This article is in good shape. A few comments:
- is there anything that can be said about why she was built as an introduction to the description? To replace which class etc?
- the converted length o/a in the infobox doesn't match the body
- same for beam and draught
- the upper limit for the crew doesn't match between the infobox and the body
- where were the guns located? The forward pair seem to be superfiring, and I can see the aft gun, but where was the fourth one? It that it in a superfiring position? Hard to tell with the guns turned towards the camera.
- RN should be Royal Navy, or add the initialisation to the lead
- the cost has an extra comma
- link Non-intervention in the Spanish Civil War
- could you get info/details on the number of convoys escorted from Hague [1]?
- Thanks for the reminder, it's been so long that I did one of these British DD articles, that I'd completely forgotten about that.
- link Clyde
- image is appropriately licensed.
That's me done. Nice work. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:10, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, all done. See if my changes satisfy.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:44, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:30, 27 August 2018 (UTC)