Talk:Green Lantern (Six Flags Great Adventure)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 21 July 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• Infobox has inconsistent commas for 1000s (or 1,000s).
• One very short para for the lead could be improved, it's supposed to summarise the article - my rule of thumb: check it against the table of contents, have you summarised the article in the lead?
• "Bolliger & Mabillard stand-up roller coaster" three links without unlinked words between is confusing to a reader. It's a hard call but can you rephrase it?
• Is there a suitable link for "inversions" for non-expert readers?
• "About 1999, its track " -> "Around 1999, its..."
• " early 2006" hyphen.
• "track returned to its " perhaps "track was returned" as it didn't do it itself.
• "(as confirmed by local media)" is that needed?
• Don't overlink Six Flags.
• What is "zoning approval"?
• "The ride is located ..." reiterate the name.
• What is B&M?
• Link Riddler's Revenge first time round.
• " peaked at #47" avoid hash for number per WP:HASH. Check others.
• Don't SHOUT in the refs.
• Check refs for correct use of en-dash in the title fields.

The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

GAN criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Several comments above to be addressed.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Not far from decent, so I'll put it on hold for seven days. Let me know when you're ready for a re-assessment. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: I believe I have addressed all the issues. Themeparkgc  Talk  00:01, 23 July 2013 (UTC)