Talk:Gottfried Kinkel

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Bob Burkhardt in topic Assessment comment

Assessment comment edit

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Better connection between the body and the references using citations would improve it. It has an infobox and several illustrations with signature. It seems too brief and needs expansion and added structure. Bob Burkhardt (talk) 22:13, 9 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

The only reservation I have about rating it B is perhaps the structure. Could it use a better lead and sections? It has a variety of graphics and seems to cover his life pretty well. Bob Burkhardt (talk) 20:33, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Structure seems pretty good now. I think in-line citations would bring it up to B standards. Bob Burkhardt (talk) 21:48, 3 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

Last edited at 21:48, 3 January 2012 (UTC). Substituted at 16:33, 29 April 2016 (UTC)