Talk:Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review
 | Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79 has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 12, 2015. (Reviewed version). |
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Infobox? edit
Something like this? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:32, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
- done --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:31, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:52, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
I'll finish this one soon JAGUAR 13:52, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria edit
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- "his third year as Thomaskantor" - should this be italicised, per some other articles?
- "Bach began the libretto for the feast" - which feast?
- "the first of these hymns was sung regularly after the sermon on Reformation Day in Leipzig" - needs a link
- "As Hofmann points out" - sounds a bit informal. Perhaps this could be As Hofmann asserted
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Once again this article has been exceptionally good. I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, well done! 
JAGUAR 22:55, 12 November 2015 (UTC)
Pre-GAN polish edit
- "...and including the first stanza from Martin Rinckart's hymn "Nun danket alle Gott" and as the closing chorale the final stanza of Ludwig Helmbold's hymn "Nun laßt uns Gott dem Herren" -- doesn't quite make sense. I don't want to adjust it as I don't know what to adjust it to. Any ideas Gerda? CassiantoTalk 20:47, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
- I split the sentence, better? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:05, 10 November 2015 (UTC)