Talk:Google Me (Kim Zolciak song)
Latest comment: 1 year ago by MarioSoulTruthFan in topic GA Review
Google Me (Kim Zolciak song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: July 4, 2022. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:21, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
Infobox edit
- Fine
Lead edit
- critics -> music critics and link to music journalism
- changed
Done
Background and release edit
- "It was then scheduled to be released to iTunes for digital download and streaming on October 5, 2010" - sounds like it was canceled, needs to be re-written
- changed
Done
Music and lyrics edit
- I see no point in the image given here as its footer it is the same as the first sentence in this section.
- changed, hope this is now okay?
- Because of copyvio's possible violations, let's trim Zolciak quote or rephrase it. See Earwig's Copyvio Detector.
- changed
Done
Critical reception edit
- music critics ->link to music journalism
- changed
- "and the song as a masterpiece." -> "and to the song as a masterpiece."
- changed
Done
Track listing edit
- Remove, per one listing of the song is non-essential.
- removed
Done
Release history edit
- The second date has the same references twice. Reference 13 and on the end of Note B, I would remove the former, since Note B already has those sources.
- changed
Done
Notes edit
- Fine
References edit
- Vulture needs "url-access=limited"
- changed
- A source check has been conducted on references 1, 3, 5, 8, 9, 11, 14, 15 and 18
Done
Overall edit
- On hold for seven days. Please let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:08, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hello MarioSoulTruthFan, I've addressed all the above points ≫ Lil-Unique1 -{ Talk }- 12:58, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Lil-unique1 The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- I've tried to fix that >> Lil-unique1 (talk) — 18:39, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Good job! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:33, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- I've tried to fix that >> Lil-unique1 (talk) — 18:39, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Lil-unique1 The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Hello MarioSoulTruthFan, I've addressed all the above points ≫ Lil-Unique1 -{ Talk }- 12:58, 4 July 2022 (UTC)