Talk:Giving You Up/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 09:02, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

This article is more or less in a good shape. I am going to do some minor adjustments as I go. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 12:36, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

Strike that, I'm quick failing this. While undertaking the task which I thought was minor amendments and an easy GA, the article is so full of errors that it would actually require a new completely rewrite. Please see the glaring errors below.

• Infobox needs all {{flat list}} templates.
• There is a jarring tag for non-free audio sample which uses such a long time rather than the 10% of song's length per WP:SAMPLE.
• The lead section where the composition is written is WP:OR since it is not present in body.
• The background section is a bloated advertisement for the parent compilation album Ultimate Kylie with its chart placements and song releases without any information on "Giving You Up"'s background.
• Composition is sourced from some shady website called Dusk411 which is user generated content.
• Same for release details, including product websites like mixkylie.co.uk
• About.com, which is not supposed to be used anywhere
• All the chart history references are repeated twice, once in the chart performance section as well as the {{singlechart}} generated references when they can be easily combined.
• Coming to MOS, ample usage of normal dashes where en-dash should have been used.

Although a short article, the nominator should have spent some time on this and the nominator hardly spent even 1 hour on this. Figures, well failed and better luck cleaning this up. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 12:57, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

@IndianBio: – Ok, thank you for the review anyway. Sorry about that, It was a bit of a "drive-through" nomination. Didn't take much notice of it that much. Will work on it more :)