Talk:Give Peace a Chance (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:51, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues

General

• No dead links. Great work!
• No dab links. Great work!
• Images have good rationales

Infobox

• I thought the article is about "Give Peace a Chance", not "Invasion"
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• Reference for "Guest stars"?
  • The episode is the reference. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Lede

• Unlink American television per WP:OVERLINK
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• "and the show's 109th episode overall" unneeded per other articles I have reviewed
  • I don't know about that. It is commonly used across other good article episodes such as the Glee episodes and "Over There", a featured article.
• No need for "in the United States" as it says it above
  • Above it says it's an 'American' show, it doesn't say it aired in the US.

Plot

• "After Shepherd spending" → "After Shepherd spend"
  • That's not proper English.

Production

• No issues

Reception

• Rename section to "Broadcast and reception"
  • Unnecessary imposing of personal criteria;  Not done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• "first broadcast" → "originally broadcast" per the above
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• Link MTV
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• "Steve Marsi of TV Fanatic was positive of the episode". Huh? Re-write to: "Steve Marsi of TV Fanatic gave a positive review"
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• "Amanda Krill of Cinema Blend called Tahir's character "likable from the moment you meet him", and she too was fearful that Karev and Adamson would form a relationship". Remove that review all together it has a not a good source, per WP:RS and WP:GNG
  • I disagree about Cinema Blend, because it is a WP:RS and although it may not be "the highest quality"; that is only a requirement of FAs. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• "Former Star-Ledger editor Alan Sepinwall was positive of the episode" → "Former Star-Ledger editor Alan Sepinwall praised the episode, etc."
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• BuddyTV doesn't need to be italic
  •  Done, and I also fixed it in the refs. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

References

• Ref. 11 and 15 are not good sources. Ref. 11 is a "why should we care what they said", and doesn't pass WP:GNG. Ref. 15 is a blog, and isn't a good source.
  • I disagree about Cinema Blend, because it is a WP:RS and although it may not be "the highest quality"; that is only a requirement of FAs. Also, although it is a blog, it is Alan Sepinwall's blog, and he is a well-known former editor of The Star-Ledger. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
• IMDb should be before TV.com
  • That's not a requirement. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

On hold, and good work. TBrandley 20:27, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

All done or responded to, TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)