Talk:German torpedo boat T13

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:10, 15 August 2020 (UTC)

Modifications

• "T13 had this mount replacing the single mount in the superfiring position in May–July during a refit." - Add installed between mount and replacing, if that is correct

Infobox

• You state that the completion date was 31 May 1941; the text says "and commissioned on 31 May 1941". A commissioning date isn't necessarily the completion date, see the French ironclad Provence article I just reviewed where the two are different. So essentially, the completion date in the infobox is uncited, and the commissioning date should be added to the infobox.

Construction and career

• "and her sisters T14, T18, T19 and T21" - Link to T18, T19, and T21 here.
  • Good catch
• "Screened by the 2nd and 3rd Torpedo Boat Flotillas (T13, T5, T9, T12, T16, T19 and T21)" - In all the other points, you list the ships in numerical order. Is the variance here intentional? I can't tell if this is an oversight or an intentional putting of T13 first, since she's the article subject
  • For those units which T13 is in, she's the first one listed. If she's not, they're alphabetical.
• " Royal Air Force Handley Page Halifax heavy bombers" - MOS:SEAOFBLUE, three links in a row.

Referencing and images look acceptable. Another tidy little article in the series, not a whole lot to pick at here. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 03:47, 15 August 2020 (UTC)

• • All done. Gotta say I'm enjoying the number of reviews that you're doing. Works nicely for my 30 for 30 project this month.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:38, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I'm back at university now, so I don't have all of my books with me for space considerations, so I'm reviewing more than content writing as a result. Hog Farm _Bacon 16:01, 17 August 2020 (UTC)