Talk:German destroyer Z22 Anton Schmitt

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 19:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

I'll do this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 19:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Images check out
Looks like your Construction and career header needs to be adjusted a level higher
- Oops.
I think you need a comma after Schmidt in Anton Schmitt who was"
You might specify that 24 September 1939 was a few weeks after the start of WWII. Parsecboy (talk) 19:57, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
- I did already in the lede. Is that not enough? Thanks for the quick turnaround.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
  - I tend to err on the side of repeating things in the intro and the body, on the assumption that not everyone will read both. Up to you, I guess. Parsecboy (talk) 20:54, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
    - That's perfectly reasonable in a longer article, but this one's pretty short.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:57, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
      - Fair enough, I'll pass this now. Parsecboy (talk) 21:58, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

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